Digital+Literacy

1) While looking at this visual, the first thing I noticed was the title: Overproteined. Is the title even a real word? Because “overproteined” is not a real word, it could be a bad turn off to the reader. Also, the title should be more straight forward if they are trying to get a clear point across. Next, because the title is not all the way straight forward, I am assuming this visual explains how Americans eat too much protein and what is mostly consumed (animals and main foods).

2/3) I am not sure if I see anything that great about this visual. Starting with P, I think the format should be more spaced out. Maybe instead of being in a row, the facts could be sprawled out more around the page with more photos so it all flows together like the Statue of Liberty picture in the power point. On the next letter A, I believe the color could change in all the boxes; either more catchy colors or a visual where all the information flows better. For T, the visual has the facts bold and that to me is important. If it’s something that is the main idea, it needs to stand out to capture the eye first. And by the words being bold, it could help the reader memorize the information better.